Mantic Meeting, Feedback + design changes

 

Here's what I submitted to the dropbox:

 

They really liked the designs, said that the character sheets were exactly what they're looking for in terms of a front and back view, with all the neccesary information ready for the 3D artist. They did have a few points to add:

 

- Make sure the rebs character's posture accounts for the tail (and to maybe go into more detail about the tail)

- Revise the mercenary's weapons a bit, give them a visible power souce/ glowing elements to make them look more like laser/ energy weapons

 

They liked the key art sketches too, I just need to balance the composition a bit more and fix the angle of the foot on the mercenary.

 

 Here's everything I did with the feedback in mind:

 

The only change I made to this character sheet was the side proportions in the top right corner, I wasn't 100% how to elaborate on the tail and did'nt want the character sheet to get too cluttered, I might come back to the tail if I have time.

 I don't think I posted the character showcase poses by themselves yet, so I'll probably repost this one with the rest of the artwork for these two. Either way I've added power supplies and more glowing stuff to this guy and his equippment, It's not much but I didn't wanna change the initial design too much, and I wanted to get it done quickly, though I might come back to this too.

 

 Finally, I changed the composition of this a little bit - moved them over to the middle, and changed the angles ever so slightly. I do tend to agonise over the placement of things so it was helpful for them to suggest where to place these two